The Son He Always Wanted (part 1)

            Twenty years ago Kevin and Ciara became husband and wife. They had a beautiful wedding, and everything was perfect in their lives. They went to Hawaii for the honeymoon, and made the most memorable memories of their lives. Every weekend, Kevin would make sure he took his wife out for a beautiful dinner. Two years later, Ciara gave birth to their first child, Melanie. Kevin was happy that Ciara made him a father, and Ciara was full with joy because she always wanted her first child to be a girl. As time went by they realize they are getting closer and closer to one another because of Melanie. Melanie filled their lives with joy and happiness. After Melanie turned one year old, Kevin decided that he wanted another child and this one should be a boy. Ciara wanted to fulfill her husband wish because she knew that ever since a kid, Kevin wanted a son to be just like him.  On October 31st, Ciara got pregnant again and this time it was worse than she imagined. She had high blood pressure, always have fever; vomiting and her legs are always swelled.  The doctor even told her this pregnancy is a high risk and it might be hard to safe both of them. She was scared, and thought about abortion because she didn’t want to risk her life. She talked to her mother, who advises her to take an abortion because she didn’t want to lose her daughter and let Melanie be motherless. Ciara had made up her mind, without even discussing it with her husband, whom she always discuss a problems with it, in order to have a solution.  Ciara went back to her doctor and made an appointment to have an abortion, which will be on November 20th.

            On November 10th, which is Ciara birthday, Kevin decided to take her out for a beautiful dinner and to see a romantic movie.  Ciara keeps feeling guilty, about not telling Kevin anything, but she knows if she does, he will never approve of her decision. Therefore she decided to say she had a miscarriage and lie about everything. While walking to go to the car, Ciara forgot her phone and purse in her drawer upstairs. She said to Kevin “Honey I will be right back, I’m going to get my purse I forgot it upstairs.” Kevin told her not to go, that he will get it for her. Kevin went and when he pulled the drawer, he sees the papers for an abortion. Kevin is in shocked and screams her name out loud.

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11 comments ↓

#1   Prudence on 11.05.11 at 10:17 pm

I like how the story starts off, then closer to the second paragraph it becomes like your reading an artical at least that I felt. I am not sure how you should fix it or if you want to but in any case I like how it is going and I want to see how it will turn out 🙂

#2   michelle on 11.07.11 at 4:44 pm

Thanks Prudence, for your feedback. I would of like any advice how to fix it because, I don’t know what to do with it. Is it because of the dates, that made you felt that you were reading an article?

#3   Rachel Golden on 11.08.11 at 6:55 pm

This is always such a controversial topic and I think this has a lot of potential. The way that this is written seems technical in way. I think that it could be interesting to see more of the internal conflict that Ciara is having, maybe? Great job, I am excited to see the end result.

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